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The patience of men is the most important and almost the most surprising fact in history. Most men and women are prepared to tolerate the intolerable. The reason for this extraordinary state of things are many and various. There is ignorance, first of all . Those who know no state of affairs other than intolerable are unaware that their act might be improved. Then there is fear. Men know that their life is intolerable , but are afraid of the consequences of revolt. The existence of sense of kinship and social solidarity constitutes another reason why people tolerate the intolerable. Men and women feel attached to the society of which they are members feel attached even when the rulers of the society treat them badly. It worthy of remark that, in a crisis the workers have always fought for the respective nations and against other workers.
খাতা জমা দেওয়ার নিয়মাবলি:
১. প্রতিটি ছাত্রছাত্রী প্রথমে পুরো Process ভালোভাবে পড়ে বুঝে নেবেন, নিয়মে ভুল ত্রুটি থাকলে Answers Sheet check করা হবে না।
২. শুধুমাত্র আমাদের দেওয়া Answers Sheet এ উত্তর লিখতে হবে। অন্য কোন Copy বা খাতায় লিখে জমা দিলে accept হবে না এবং পুরো উত্তরটি নিচে দেওয়া সিঙ্গেল পেজের মধ্যে লিখতে হবে। এই পেজটি আপনি নিচে দেওয়ার Download বোতামে ক্লিক করে Download করুন এবং প্রিন্ট আউট বের করে নিন।
৩. হাতের লেখা পরিস্কার না হলে বা খাতায় কাটা ছেড়া থাকলে, সেই খাতা rejected হবে।
৪. কারো খাতা reject হলে সে আমাদের official number এ কোনও প্রকার message করতে পারবে না । যদি এই সম্পর্কিত কোনও message করা হয়, তার পরবর্তী কোন খাতা publish করা হবে না এবং sir চেক করে remarks দেবেন না ।
৫. Submit করার আগে মোবাইলের Camera দিয়ে clear ও bright ছবি তুলবেন। Blur, shadow বা fold থাকলে গ্রহণযোগ্য হবে না। প্রয়োজনে ছবি ঠিকমতো crop করে নেবেন।
৬. পেইজের নিচে Scroll করলে Comments Box দেখতে পাবেন ( নিচে দেওয়া ছবির মতো )। সেখানে আপনার কোনো জিজ্ঞাস্য থাকলে লিখবেন বা “Done” লিখে দেবেন।
৭. Comments Box এ থাকা Image Upload icon ( নিচে দেওয়া ছবির মতো) এ click করে Answers Sheet এর photo upload করবেন।
৮. তারপর আপনার Name + Batch Name + WhatsApp Number লিখবেন (পেইড WhatsApp গ্রুপে যোগদানের জন্য আপনি যে নম্বরটি ব্যবহার করেছিলেন তা লিখুন)। সব ঠিক আছে কিনা দেখে Submit button এ click করবেন।
Note: WhatsApp Number publicly show হবে না, ৮০০১**৬৭ এর মতো দেখাবে।
৯. Submit করার পর “Waiting for Approval” দেখাবে। আমাদের team পরীক্ষা করে ২৪ থেকে ৪৮ ঘন্টার মধ্যে Approve করবে। তারপর Comments Section এ আপনার লেখা দেখাবে।
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গুরুত্বপূর্ণ নির্দেশনা:
১. একাধিকবার answer sheet submit করবেন না, একবারেই সঠিকভাবে জমা দিন। আপনি যদি একাধিকবার সাবমিট করেন তাহলে আপনার পেপার ক্যানসেল হবে।
২. Submit করার পর ২৪ থেকে ৪৮ ঘন্টার মধ্যে Comments দেখা যাবে।
৩. Sir নিজের সময় অনুযায়ী আপনার Comment ও Answer check করে Reply দেবেন। তবে তার জন্য কোনভাবেই আমাদের official নাম্বার বা স্যারের নাম্বারে কোন মেসেজ বা কল করা যাবে না। যদি কেউ এই বিষয়ে বার বার কল বা মেসেজ করেন তাহলে তার পেপার ক্যানসেল হয়ে যাবে।
৪. কোনো ভুল তথ্য বা অপ্রাসঙ্গিক কিছু লিখলে, আপনার উত্তরপত্র গ্রহণযোগ্য হবেনা এবং Reject হয়ে যাবে।
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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Titile: Enduring the Intolerable
Human beings often endure intolerable conditions due to ignorance, fear of the consequences of revolt, and their strong sense of social belonging. Even when rulers treat them unjustly, people remain loyal to their society. History shows that in times of crisis, workers support their own nation rather than opposing the authorities who oppress them.
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