Translate the following passage (Full marks 20):
গাড়ি অবিশ্রাম অগ্রসর হইতে লাগিল। ভাঙা মাঠের এক এক জায়গায় শুষ্ক বালুকারেখা দেখা যায়; সেই নদীর পথে বড়ো বড়ো কালো পাথর পৃথিবীর কঙ্কালের মতো বাহির হইয়া পড়িয়াছে। মাঝে এক একটা মুন্ডের মতো পাহাড় দেখা যাইতেছে। দূরের পাহাড়গুলি ঘন নীল, যেন আকাশের নীল মেঘ খেলা করিতে আসিয়া পৃথিবীতে ধরা পড়িয়াছে। আকাশে উড়িবার জন্য যেন পাখা তুলিয়াছে, কিন্তু বাঁধা আছে বলিয়া উড়িতে পারিতেছে না- আকাশ হইতে তাহার স্বজাতীয় মেঘেরা আসিয়া তাহার সঙ্গে কোলাকুলি করিয়া যাইতেছে।
খাতা জমা দেওয়ার নিয়মাবলি:
১. প্রতিটি ছাত্রছাত্রী প্রথমে পুরো Process ভালোভাবে পড়ে বুঝে নেবেন, নিয়মে ভুল ত্রুটি থাকলে Answers Sheet check করা হবে না।
২. শুধুমাত্র আমাদের দেওয়া Answers Sheet এ উত্তর লিখতে হবে। অন্য কোন Copy বা খাতায় লিখে জমা দিলে accept হবে না এবং পুরো উত্তরটি নিচে দেওয়া সিঙ্গেল পেজের মধ্যে লিখতে হবে। এই পেজটি আপনি নিচে দেওয়ার Download বোতামে ক্লিক করে Download করুন এবং প্রিন্ট আউট বের করে নিন।
৩. হাতের লেখা পরিস্কার না হলে বা খাতায় কাটা ছেড়া থাকলে, সেই খাতা rejected হবে।
৪. কারো খাতা reject হলে সে আমাদের official number এ কোনও প্রকার message করতে পারবে না । যদি এই সম্পর্কিত কোনও message করা হয়, তার পরবর্তী কোন খাতা publish করা হবে না এবং sir চেক করে remarks দেবেন না ।
৫. Submit করার আগে মোবাইলের Camera দিয়ে clear ও bright ছবি তুলবেন। Blur, shadow বা fold থাকলে গ্রহণযোগ্য হবে না। প্রয়োজনে ছবি ঠিকমতো crop করে নেবেন।
৬. পেইজের নিচে Scroll করলে Comments Box দেখতে পাবেন ( নিচে দেওয়া ছবির মতো )। সেখানে আপনার কোনো জিজ্ঞাস্য থাকলে লিখবেন বা “Done” লিখে দেবেন।
৭. Comments Box এ থাকা Image Upload icon ( নিচে দেওয়া ছবির মতো) এ click করে Answers Sheet এর photo upload করবেন।
৮. তারপর আপনার Name + Batch Name + WhatsApp Number লিখবেন (পেইড WhatsApp গ্রুপে যোগদানের জন্য আপনি যে নম্বরটি ব্যবহার করেছিলেন তা লিখুন)। সব ঠিক আছে কিনা দেখে Submit button এ click করবেন।
Note: WhatsApp Number publicly show হবে না, ৮০০১**৬৭ এর মতো দেখাবে।
৯. Submit করার পর “Waiting for Approval” দেখাবে। আমাদের team পরীক্ষা করে ২৪ থেকে ৪৮ ঘন্টার মধ্যে Approve করবে। তারপর Comments Section এ আপনার লেখা দেখাবে।
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গুরুত্বপূর্ণ নির্দেশনা:
১. একাধিকবার answer sheet submit করবেন না, একবারেই সঠিকভাবে জমা দিন। আপনি যদি একাধিকবার সাবমিট করেন তাহলে আপনার পেপার ক্যানসেল হবে।
২. Submit করার পর ২৪ থেকে ৪৮ ঘন্টার মধ্যে Comments দেখা যাবে।
৩. Sir নিজের সময় অনুযায়ী আপনার Comment ও Answer check করে Reply দেবেন। তবে তার জন্য কোনভাবেই আমাদের official নাম্বার বা স্যারের নাম্বারে কোন মেসেজ বা কল করা যাবে না। যদি কেউ এই বিষয়ে বার বার কল বা মেসেজ করেন তাহলে তার পেপার ক্যানসেল হয়ে যাবে।
৪. কোনো ভুল তথ্য বা অপ্রাসঙ্গিক কিছু লিখলে, আপনার উত্তরপত্র গ্রহণযোগ্য হবেনা এবং Reject হয়ে যাবে।
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Nicely written but
It will be- Skull like mountains
Marks-09/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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You could not express many sentences properly. Even many tense related grammatical mistakes with wrong application of tense.
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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Well written
Dont use- impersonated(wrong usage in this context)
Marks-09/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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You could not express many sentences properly. Even many tense related grammatical mistakes. First line is grammatically wrong, it is not acceptable
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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Nicely written except a few silly mistakes
Write- in between not-occasionally
Marks-09/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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Wrong application of tense.
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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A few silly mistakes but on an average ok.
Marks-06/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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You could not translate the ending part meaningfully
Marks-05/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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A few silly mistakes but ok.
Marks-08/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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A few wrong sentence formation and silly mistakes.
– were came out
Write- came out
Marks-06/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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From the middle part to end part you could not translated meaningfully.
Marks-03/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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You could not express ending parts of the sentences properly and meaningfully.
Even first line is wrong
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Marks-03/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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Nicely written, a few silly mistakes. Follow my answer.
Marks-09/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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You could not express many sentences properly and meaningfully.
Marks-04/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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Wrong sentence formations with grammatical mistakes even You could not express many sentences properly. Wrong application of tense
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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Nicely written
Marks-10/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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Wrong sentence formations with grammatical mistakes. You could not express many sentences properly.
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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Prominent mistakes in sentence formations
1) Mountains had been seen like
2)were deep blue as if……
Even many sentences could not me expressed meaningfully.
Marks-04/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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Wrong application of tense from the second line.
Dont use the word tirelessly. Follow my writing below
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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You could not express many sentences properly. Even wrong sentence formations
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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You could not express many sentences properly. Even many tense related grammatical mistakes.
Marks-03/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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A few silly mistakes are there- Rocks were seen not could be seen
Ending part was not trabslated meaningfully
Marks-07/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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You started nicely
Prominent wrong- were come
And ending parts completely wrong
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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Wrong application of tense and even you could not translate many lines properly
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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Wrong sentence formation with grammatical mistakes and wrong Tense.
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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Wrong application of tense from second line and even you could not express many sentences properly
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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A few prominent silly mistakes have been noticed. Overall not up to the mark
Marks-06/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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Wrong application of tense. The whole passage should be translated in Past Tense
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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You could not express many sentences properly. Even many tense related grammatical mistakes.
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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You could not express many sentences properly. Even many tense related grammatical mistakes.
Marks-02/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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Wrong application of tense. The whole translation should be in Past tense.
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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You could not express many sentences properly. Even many tense related grammatical mistakes.
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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You could not express many sentences properly. Even many tense related grammatical mistakes.
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.
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You could not express many sentences properly. Even many tense related grammatical mistakes.
Marks-03/20
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The car started moving forward fast and steadily./The car began to move forward fast and steadily. Dried sand-bed was seen/visible in some places of the uneven field. Many enormous sizes of black stones/Many giant black stones, looked like the skeleton of the earth came out /made their heads a little higher on the way to the river. In some places, a few hills, looked like the skeleton of human head, were visible. The far-off hills appeared deep blue as if the blue clouds of the sky came down to play with them and got caught. It seemed that the clouds spread their wings to fly in the sky but could not as they were tied up and their fellow friends from the sky were coming down and going upward after embracing them.